What
It Was Like: A Novel of Love and Consequence. Peter Seth. The Story Plant. September
2014. 464 pp. ISBN#: 9781611881905.
A nameless high school graduate has
his future all lined up. He’s going to
work in a summer camp and planning to begin student life at Columbia
University. Obviously, he’s a bright guy
who’s just wanting to earn some money for his college days in the fall of
1968. However, It should be noted that
he’s (nameless throughout the entire story) writing this from jail and so we
realize it’s really an account of his memories, flashbacks and reflections on
the pivotal days that landed him where he is now.
Falling in love very quickly with
Rachel Prince, a relative of the owner of the summer camp where the narrator is
working, the narrator will do anything, anywhere, anytime to be with her. She’s very attractive and carries a spark of
energy the narrator refers to as “musical.” It also turns out she’s rather
mercurial with her temper, one minute delightfully endearing and mesmerizing
and the next sharp-tongued and/or tough.
She is between a counselor and camp member, and there are very strict
rules for this in-between position. However, she’s very good at her job and the
camp kids love her. It also turns out
that Rachel is very ticked off because she was supposed to take a “teen tour”
of Europe, a bucket list goal that got trashed when her parents announced they
were getting divorced.
The story gets a bit draggy midway
through the book and yet somehow even though they are repetitive scenes,
there’s enough rebellion and breaking of rules, as well as sexual dalliance, to
keep the reader flipping the pages.
All of a sudden (no spoilers here),
the danger heightens and rapidly escalates to the point of two scenarios the
reader cannot ever envision while reading those previously pages that are hot
only with passion, albeit threaded through with quite a bit of obsession.
In the beginning of their
relationship, the narrator senses there is something “dangerous” about Rachel
and later some conversations about what her “therapist” and family says drop
more hints but nothing further.
This is no Love Story with a gushy, maudlin ending. It’s passionate, stark,
haunted fiction that nails it on the head about young adult romance gone awry.
It’s also about the naive hormonal dominance that goes into total denial about
some rather obvious “warning” signals beyond the physical attraction both so
deeply embrace! Nicely done, indeed, Peter Seth! Keep writing!